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| Queen of Boredom 2006-04-06 ch 1,  | abusevery amusing poem...very nice though...good writing..keep it up.. |
| Charity F 2005-09-11 ch 1, | abuseWOW! this is like, the coolest thing i have ever read! like, WOW! keep this good stuff coming! Awesome! ~Tabitha |
| PetiteLumiere 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abuseFirst off, I didn't diss chickens. Secondly, my poem "The Sky is Falling" is not about specific people but about world events shaped by everyone around us, including us, and most importantly our choices and how we blame eachother. I like this poem though. It contrasts the idea of writer's block with a somewhat unique poem, though it's a topic that's been used before. It's good, really good. I like that you try to use rhyme as much as you can, but in your bio thing =P you say that you only really like poems that rhyme, do you mean completely, or just with some type of rhyming scheme? This poem seems to show that you put some effort into it, I'm not sure how much, but hey you did base it on a song. Anyway, good stuff. Also, I've always wanted to go to NZ, have you ever been to Canada? Review again sometime if you want. ~PL |
| Sunshine Hansen 2005-07-20 ch 1, | abuseI would be inclined to agree with the good doctor, there is a certain pretention about the poem which alienates the reader and yet subtly counterpoints the all too relevant subject matter therein. Therefore i would suggest remembrance of an allegory concerning atilla the hun and a cartwheel from another doctor. |
| Princess-anna57 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseHehe, this is SO cute! I love it! Keep writing! Love always, Anna |
| Sekhmet Johnson 2005-06-30 ch 1, | abuseKickass, in a word.'he's sitting alone, writing a bit/trying too hard to make the rhyme scheme fit' |
| aquila scuro 2005-06-07 ch 1, | abuseNeat! Very neat! nice work, can relate to this, I'll bet a lot of people can^^ great work, I like! Keep writing! |
| Biene 2005-06-05 ch 1, anon. | abusewow...this is totally different than any porm I have EVER read!! Wow..this is awesome and I suppose I can relate to it. |
| Eyes of Amethyst 2005-06-01 ch 1, | abuseHaha! That's SO true! I can totally relate! I couldn't help but laugh as I read on. An interesting poem with an interesting subject. Keep it up! ~Eyes Of Amethyst |
| Darisha 2005-06-01 ch 1, | abuseLOL! I like the way you've written this. Very amusing and so true. |
| In Search of Sunrise 2005-05-31 ch 1, | abusehahah nice ryhmes lol...and a quite intriguing poem lol...the stanzas are quite different..but overall it's very well written! =P ~DW |