Crying right now... amazing.

oh my good u wrote something about my pen-name too! only mine has a 'd' in the end. _ anyway, this piece flows so smoothly it's like a clear spring on a summer's day. beautiful.

review me if you're free!

summerdazed

Nice rhythm and rhyme in this piece. It keeps the poem flowing along smoothly. And the couplet at the end is a nice final statement. Good work. Keep writing! :)

Beautiful. The first stanza is so true. Great work.

nice!

SHWHOA! that was really really good.i liked that A LOT! wow. just wow.

whatsa

Nice flow and rhyme. I can relate to this, these feelings to reminisce.

well-written. i enjoyed this.

wow that was so sweet. i reaaly loved iti added you to my favs

Wow this is really good. i love the way it rhymes and everything seems to fit in so perfectly! great job!

gooey

Sweet topic, great how you wrote this for someone you know. When I do that it always ends up being weird. But I definatly love it, the rhyming is great. Wonderful job. THanks for the reivew. :)

wow that was amazing. great flow

Lovely, it all works so well.

I thought you didn't like him. Shows how stupid I am, lol. Anyways, awesome poem, I loved it. I totally LOVE the line "...that melted with long summer days..." Beautiful imagery I got from it. Good Job!

Oh I love this, the way it moves so quickly, until you get to the end and read the parenthesis. The rhythm matches the theme so well.

And very meaningful... -Kat