Grah! I knew it! But then again, that happens, knowing you and how your brain works, Jenn. Niftiness!

This is a really great story! It's ironic how those kinds of things happen. I mean, that maybe wouldn't happen...I wouldn't know. I'll just shut up now and tell you I love this story.

Are you continuing this story? I hope you do.

Pretty good, although the pacing seemed a bit rushed. I would imagine that De Mars might give Mira a lecture on the way home about not talking to strangers, although she could trust him if he was in uniform or something like that.