Reviews for Black, White and Grey

dewi-chan 2007-11-21 ch 1,	hei vulpine...hora..hora...you can see me in gempakstarz forum.. damn the mis spelling...who cares that minor mistake.. i think this story is the best angst genre...full of emotional relese... gambatte kudasai^_^
jessrin 2007-06-09 ch 1,	pretty much straight to the point and not much fuss. There were some obvious misspellings...unless you actually meant it to be written that way. However...I'll just say you should re-read you're story to check for mistakes like that.
butterfly^kiss 2005-06-11 ch 1,	Nice story, but I thought the ending's kind of... I don't know, off. Uhm, don't ask me what that means. I just think the last sentence kind of don't fit in.
Nestalgica 2005-06-01 ch 1,	great plotline, but it needs much more detail with less dialogue. i think that the scene is over way too quickly; we didn't even know White, Grey or Black before this. You could make a sort of prologue just to explain what happened before this whole schpeal... i dunno -- it's good how it is ^_~ ~Max W.~