 Louellena 2005-09-27 . chapter 1like blinkers on a horse... exceot pointing it out. This is an interesting way of looking at it.§Lulu§ |
 Madame French Fry 2005-06-05 . chapter 1that was cool. somewhat confusing at times, but by the end everything made sence. pretty good job. |
 painunspoken 2005-06-03 . chapter 1wow that was very good ^^ |
 Ivy Shoelaces 2005-06-02 . chapter 1Wow. Very moving. I clap for you.~PhantasmicElfPirate |
 account not in use 2005-06-01 . chapter 1Wow, very powerful. I love the anger and the truth in this. |
 Slowly Sinking 2005-06-01 . chapter 1Hmm, maybe the word truth was repeated too much at the beginning, it just felt like it lost meaning. But I like the way the Parent interrupted the Actor after that. The final speech was cool, perfect to clarify exactly what you were trying to say. |