I-F*ing-LOVE-this-poem! "Don’t you hear the silence?"... beautiful. Depressed writing sort of appeals to me... of course, all your writing appeals to me, anyway, but wow. This is just amazing. No other words.

I really like this piece. It has a nice flow to it. I can relate to this very well. Great work as always. Keep it up!

It was good for the fact you haven't written in 5 months. Lol.

Well the emotion i think is the main part of a poem. It doesn't have to 'ryhme' or 'flow' or whatever else people think of to comment on. writing is beautiful because it's the emotion, pain or bliss...all lovely, and that gets lost alot...

ANNA

Wow, I love it! And it's not crappy!!I'm so glad to see you writing again

i liked this. especially the ending. ends on a sad and dark note which makes it all more realistic cause we all die in the end anyways. nice!

Death is such an interesting topic to write about. It can be so symbolic or it can be so definitive. I liked this poem it was broken and it fit.

Ooh a new piece! It's not crappy at all. Really I like it and I think that it's wonderfull to see a poem up here. Somber and a bit existentialist which is cool. Anyway great job and keep writing :D

Let me be honest with you, that is a god piece of work, especially after not writing for a long time. It's not a song so that was a surprise, but it's really good, I love your stuff, and thank you so much for your continuous reviews, they really mean a lot to me :DAlways~Trinka

i know the feelings, good write

Eh, not crappy but not your best either. Still lovely. No more stopping for 5 months! *Scolds*

hey. it's nice to have you back. Not a bad piece, though it's weird to see you writing poetry after so many songs. I like it; sweet but sad. I especially like the ending.

No one's reviewed yet...when did you post this? Anyways, it was good.