|Reviews for Alone|
| OneXMuerte 8/24/06 . chapter 1
this poem was great and i think it's a good piece and choice of words. its one of my favorites now, and somehow it makes u feel that you want to become friends with the girl. lol :) other than that, its great once again.
| Raya Dronaile 12/21/05 . chapter 1
A sad poem and well written. You've done well to come up with such a splendid poem such as this from a picture. I myself haven't tried that technique before. It sounds very tragic, and with a tragic ending, well done. Keep up the good work!
| Pheobe Meryll 9/28/05 . chapter 1
Aw, sad. I like that it was inspired by a picture. It explains the uniqueness of the situation. Thruthfully, it's not the most moving piece of poetry I ever read, but it's well-written and descriptive, so kudos.
| Louellena 9/27/05 . chapter 1
"The tears fall as she recalls" stuck out for some reason, and "Does anyone care? Anybody at all?" as well. I like picture-based poems - don't know why.§Lulu§
| ATH-dreams 7/31/05 . chapter 1
This was really good. I'd like to see the picture. :)
| C-dog 6/13/05 . chapter 1
hey great poem :) mine wasn't nearly as good :P
| Cry Tears of Darkness 6/12/05 . chapter 1
a sad poem, very sad. its good tho. i like it
| redsage 6/9/05 . chapter 1
why do people feel alone anyway? hehe what a question... such a sad poem.. i can almost see the picture.
| Ethereal Kisses 6/5/05 . chapter 1
This poem is fantastic, and I particularly like the verse:
"She’s dead to the othersNever receives any staresNot even a glanceNobody cares"
That is just so emotional and touches at the heart of anyone who's ever felt alone in their life. I also really like the structure of the last line, which makes it seem so final. It rocks.
| simpleplan13 6/1/05 . chapter 1
very sad... well done
| S0ulSearching 6/1/05 . chapter 1
*cheers and clapping ensue* This is awsome! I love it...it's intriguing...Keep it up.-pammy-
| Lavender341 6/1/05 . chapter 1
This is sad but very well written. Keep writing!