aw this was nice. i liked it.

This was interesting...definitely good for a first piece. :)

nice...how did she get on the streets?

You're good when it comes to details, you know. Details, dialogue, and. . . d - d - drugs? Haha. Uh, I'll come back to you when I think of something else that starts with the letter d. Because it's HUGS not DRUGS. Dur. Hahaha.

Liked the detailed emotional state
not bad for first posted story
1-10 scale hm...7
(I'm not must for short stuff so it must pretty good)
gonna go read more stuff =)

Wow... that was amazing! I really liked how everything was described and she was only called 'street girl' until the end.

I love the style of writing! It's so detailed almost like you could see out of the street girls eyes. Awesome!

I REMEMBER WHEN YOU WROTE THIS CUZ IT REMINDS ME OF MY STORY! lol I love you banaba

Aw... I love it! You're such a good writer! Well, stay away from the evil chachafruits!