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Dark-Angel29 2008-04-13 ch 35,	abuse“With vampires, all you need is a wooden steak, right?” I just though I would let you know you've used the wrong "steak" in your story, it should be stake. other than that, good chapter!
Black Cat Bastet 2008-04-10 ch 35,	abuseYes! Another chapter...the tension and climax is getting bigger! I was suprised Kamei was tricked so easily...then again demons are tricky creatures...and I'm glad Bailey and Rose get to fight, espcally Rose since she's been locked up for so long. Great chapter...and I understand what its like to take your time with updating, school is so time consuming for me, lol...^_^ -Black Cat Bastet
shimi c carroll 2008-01-28 ch 4,	abuseamazing story. keep up the grate work
shimi c carroll 2008-01-28 ch 3,	abusereally good story. please continue to update. by: shimi c carroll
shimi c carroll 2008-01-28 ch 2,	abusekeep up the good work.
shimi c carroll 2008-01-28 ch 1,	abusethis story is very good. please keep it up. by: shimi c carroll
Black Cat Bastet 2008-01-19 ch 34,	abuseSorry this review is late...anyways, another good chapter, it had a lot of action, and was once again, very well written. I know I say this all the time, but your story is really good, I love all the characters, and espcally the powers they have! I hope Derrick and Kamei(oh, and Camille too,). I also wonder if Derrick will ever trust Bailey again, hm...^_^ And yes, I did have a great Christmas, I hope you had a good one as well. -Black Cat Bastet
Dark-Angel29 2008-01-15 ch 34,	abusewow... crazyness! that was awesome and action packed, and they better save derrick!
MagickMaster143 2008-01-09 ch 1,	abuseHi there. I was just wondering if, when your finished, your going to try and make a book. Because I think that would be so awesome. I'm working on a story right now. It's kind of like yours but a little different. The main character is descended from a long line of Witches and he gets accepted to a boarding school called The Witches Academy. He has the power of Telekinesis and Cryokinesis. I'm still unsure, I might change his power of Cryokinesis. But anyways I hope you'll read it when I'm done. Plus I love your story. My favorite character is Kamei.
Black Cat Bastet 2007-11-25 ch 33,	abuseOnce again, another good chapter. And it wasn't too long, and it wasn't short at all! Very nice...The father daughter reuion was very heart-warming, and I can't wait to read the rest of their plans! Go Team Supernatural! lol...I hope you had a good Thanksgiving, and update when you can! ^_^ -Black Cat Bastet
Dark-Angel29 2007-09-18 ch 32,	abusethat was good. poor betty though! that was hilarious. i think with a bit of editing this would be awesome to publish. its so creative and unique, i love it :)
Azure Skye 2007-08-25 ch 32,	abusehey, i love this story so much! you're a fantastic writer, and i think it's great how you've planned and written everything so far. i don't really want it to end, but it's pretty exciting getting to the ultimate climax - can't wait to see what happens! keep up the great work. azure skye x
2007-08-25 ch 32, anon.	abuseYeah! Another chapter(I say that a lot in my reviews, don't I? lol...), I was glad you update...the chapter was very good...reminded me of a spy movie, all this sneeking around and stuff. The poor women that Arian and Kamei pranked...that was funny. A very well-written chapter...I hope you enjoy your dorm life, and update when you can! Also, the publishing thing does sound like a good idea! This story is great, I'd buy a copy of this book(even though I'm already reading it...^_^)! Hope you summer was good! -Black Cat Bastet
Black Cat Bastet 2007-07-16 ch 31,	abuseAnother good chapter, I'm glad you updated...Derrick is going to have to be careful with Bailey on his trail. Like I've said before, your writting is great...and I know what its like to re-write things, my writting and stories back in eigth grade was horrible! So many miss-spellings...but I guess through out the years you grow to be better writers if you practice and work ** it. Anyways, great story, I hope you update soon...I really do wonder how your going to end it(will there be a sequal? Just asking...), and I hope you are having a good summer! ^_^ -Black Cat Bastet
Dark-Angel29 2007-07-16 ch 31,	abuseo... ah... publishing eh? that would be cool. this is a very awesome story. i've quite enjoyed reading it so far. nice chapter

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