I like this alot , pulled me right in and kept my attention.

OMG! this story is the best ive read in a long time i luv it beyond words, i don't know who u r, or what u'r about but man i know u were born to write. if its not published, get it done. i think that itll be a huge hit, omg i luv it. i sat here for bout an hr and reda the whole thing, my only mistake was being on msn, i hated to take my eyes from it. i almost felt as if i was in a trance. i couldn't stop reading... i request another. wow that was phenomenal!keep it up.~Babs