this is unlike your other stuff. I mean it's still depressing and makes you think but it... i dunno. it different. well. it's still

awesome! that last"WhoAreYou" was really chilling. I like the metaphor of the chalice and the line:"where all will remember me as a side-show"cool! I'm curious who inspired this poem out of you.

This is amazing...Honestly. Mine are so not better than yours! Good job.