Sweet, I like the movement in this poem. It flows and sways as you depict a dancer, the swaying, sand, jittering. Quite nice.

And you say my poem was good?! The end of this poem is much better than mine, because i know exactly how you(the character) feels...however sad that may be...anyway...to answer your question...i don't know who inspired it...it just came out...if i had to take a stab at it...i'd say my current boyfriend...but seeing as how i love him as much as i hate him, i can't be sure...and now that i'm positive that i'm rambling...i'm off to go do something else...much love!...p.s.--this is going on my fav's and so are you!