Ok, this is officially awesome. How long did it take you to write this? It's easily comparable to some things I've seen by Robert Frost, who also liked to play with the sonnet form. You have almost every single poetic device in here that I can think of, and I somehow get the idea that this wasn't done consciously; everything sounds too natural and fitting, not forced at all. I'm amazed you could stay in sonnet form for something this long, that must be really hard.

I completely sympathize with the sentiments in this, I spend too much time brooding also. ^_^() I'm really glad you've started writing poems again, since you said you hadn't in a long time; they've obviously been waiting to come out. :)

Bravo, interesting how the harder you try to change the more you stay the same. Keep it up!

The fate you share is my own...intelligence a curse...this is fantastic your first sonnet is a hit...my other review sounded bad the comp died while i was writin it i meant my new poem is trash yours is great...love the idea and feeling expressed and the ending sharing the fate...superb...Long Live The Queen CMF

doesn't a sonnet only have 14 lines? well at least a Shakesperian sonnet does... i dunno bout Petrachian sonnet. but I LOVE IT nonetheless;o) so keep it up, it's awesomely wicked!