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kAIT REDFERN 2005-06-04 . chapter 1
You could probably turn this into a long story if you wanted. All the places she has been, the constant feeling of being lonely, wanted to belong. It just started ideas running through my head. I don't actually think you should or are going to add to this. As it speaks for itself and is a beautiful piece of short writing. Plus from the writing style I am pretty sure that is it. It is just there were so many details and feelings in this that my mind started exploring. Serious and sad but very good. Luv Kaitx
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