   Beautifula 2006-06-25 . chapter 1I relaly like this. Bitter and resentful but you've wrote it in a different style to what I normally read so it's refreshing. Good stuff! |
 Kaylee Sabrina Green 2005-12-04 . chapter 1well well well I see you havent lost the flair. Hows College treating you my friend? |
 KaseyLovesNoOne 2005-09-18 . chapter 1You dare to call this masterpiece "bad"?! *swings fists wildly* HOW DARE YOU! It's not at all bad, just depressed. And I'm somewhat of a depressed writer myself, so I feel a connection with this piece. Your wording is fantastic, not to mention you opened with the line: "Hath thou come to bury me in my grave?" *thinks of Shakespearian times and swoons* |
 HauntedMisery 2005-07-09 . chapter 1Wow, this is great, awesome work! |
 konochi 2005-07-01 . chapter 1Beautiful. |
 moonandradio 2005-06-14 . chapter 1Okay. I agree, that was kind of crappy. Lol. |
 Anna178 2005-06-05 . chapter 1i know how you feel with the A/N, my writing is suffering. Anyway I don't think this is crap, and I love the old english in it.
ANNA |
 pale doll 2005-06-05 . chapter 1Ooh I really like this one, especially the opening line! It remineded me of Shakespeare. And it's not crap, stop saying that :P hehe |
 Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-06-04 . chapter 1hehehe and now for another review! and cause i love to cause issues and be stupid, im saying HAPPY BIRTHDAY in this review and not the one for your 18th bday poem, hehe! yeah leave it to me to do that. anyways. i liek this. very dark seemly and nicely put. good writings. |
 Princess Alice 2005-06-02 . chapter 1I thought it was weird how it started out all formal at the beginning, but it was pretty good. |
 Made in U.S.A. 2005-06-02 . chapter 1This is not crappy. Really you should stop being so ** yourself because this is pretty good especially after such a long break. Reminds me of a Shakespearean tragedy and I do enjoy that. Beautiful yet dark, keep writing :D |
 Crimson Riley 2005-06-02 . chapter 1The beginning was a bit rough, but at the end you pulled it together very well. |
 Ente 2005-06-02 . chapter 1hey! crap you say? well, it's not your best, I'll agree with you there, but I guess you've got to dig off all the rusty stuff from the 5 month break before you can get into the core of amazing writing again right? It still seems nice to me. |
 xnvrmndx 2005-06-02 . chapter 1I love the opening lines:"Hath thou come to bury me in my grave?Or just to see how far a person can fall?"Pretty damn neat poem! |
 katiebuggie 2005-06-02 . chapter 1I really like this. It's dark beautiful. I can definitely relate. great write! |
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