this nudged me to look up Ithaca but rather than finding the oral tradition I found a quaint travel place with a lovely picture for my FP profile page.

The end is lovelylovely. The formatting of the poem adds to it's... choppiness. Bleh, I'm not good with reviews. I love the poem though!

This is so beautiful. I love the 'sun dried memoirs' part. The 'backandforth' repetition makes me think of a pendulum.

That was great...so profound it just makes you think.

beautiful i love poetry like this. so choppy and raw and intense with emotions and awesome descriptions. love it.

this is just wicked. it reads like doodles on a page- enhancing the raw reality of it all.