LMAO! Anthrax and Ecoli. Good Story. I think this is more of supernatural rather than horror, but great!

Very nice. It reminds me faintly of a book by Piers Anthony; "For Love of Evil". Great book, this story gives an interesting view into those people who want to be the king of hell. Read "For Love of Evil"!

Great start. Love the names of Dread's and Loco's "friends" and the opening of this story. I like your writing style and the dialogue. Awesome job!