Damn that hits close to home. Excellent poem!

*sniffles* Well that reminded me of all my exs. Still I like it. You've done an excellent job of captureing the mood and I can't help hopeing that he/she gets their love.

My friend Alisha (also known as hopes-mercy of fiction press) told me about this poem and it sounded really good so I thought that I would check it out, and i HAVE to agree with her. It was an AWESOME poem. Great work Muted Prose!

Hold on, I can't see at the moment. To many tears in my eyes. I think they're clearing up. uh, uh-oh their not... WAH! ;-; it's so sad and sweet and I love it! I don't think that GREAT! is enough praise... *sighs* oh well, I guess you get it...

i like this piece a lot, it reminds me of an incubus song that i used to really like, but really i did like this peice, it was well written, thank you for sharing