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| cullenwannabe 2008-07-23 ch 12, | abuseI really enjoy your story. I has great depth and emotion. I like how you have the present and past. The only problem I noticed was that you switched between "Chelsea" and "Charisse" You haven't updated in nearly three years, but I hope you do continue this. I would like to know what happens to John and Joyce. |
| Pretty Lady 2006-10-07 ch 12, anon. | abuseAh, oh wow. That was really really strong. I probably cried like a hundred and one times reading the whole thing. The relationships between John and Joyce is kind of twisted but I think it's way wayy better off that way. I love this story. At first I was really hesitant to read it knowing it would end bad (I read the little blurb in your profile first). I'm a sucker for happy endings. But I have to say, I'm glad I did read it. This is actually more realistic and easier to relate to then those happy stories we all know and love. And it's far better written as well. I do hope you get around to updating this. I really reallyy like it. Baii |
| Juniper Nights 2006-02-15 ch 12, | abusewow...very emotional...great job |
| brooke 2005-11-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseyesh...review...review or else joy no write no mo'. haha :) lalalala eat mo' chicken m |
| haha! 2005-09-14 ch 6, anon. | abuseo.O haha. love you |
| haha! 2005-08-31 ch 4, anon. | abuseOI...i also wanna know...is matt british?? im confused on matt and jacob...theres not much about those two charaters...i dunno... :) |
| haha! 2005-08-31 ch 5, anon. | abuseOIOIOI! I LOVE YOU OI! hehe...it made me laugh...u gotta do sumthin about that ickle mucus pucus though...lol...i lurved it though oi! :) :) :) :D :D :D |
| Anonymous had a son. He's h... 2005-08-09 ch 4, anon. | abuseI'm loving this. XD I like my character...alot. >_> |
| chari 2005-07-27 ch 3, anon. | abuseman... it's a little weird reading this. XD you definitely need to write more, though... seriously, your writing gets more amazing with every sentence. your characters are perfect. o.O and i really want to see what you're going to do with us. i mean them. >>; |
| NomadicWriter 2005-07-27 ch 3, | abuseYour stories really interesting and i can't wait to read more i hope that you update soon because i can't wait to find out what happens, I hope Joyce will be alright and that John eventually did like her! and the girls said that Micheal was abusive to Chelsea - was he? because i really hope that he wasn't! well please please please update soon!-Kate xoxo |
| MisomeruBijin 2005-07-21 ch 2, | abuseHey,Its me again I waited forever for you to update but I'm glad to see you finally got around to it! Really good lots of drama and the picture will slowly unfold hopefully not too slowly :P j/k Some wonderful ideas going on that your using. Can't wait to find out more!Much loveBritt |
| MisomeruBijin 2005-06-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is really interesting I can't wait to find out what lead up to this is it going to be a split story? taking place past and present at the same time? Does that make sense? lol. But I like it I mean I can't wait to find out more! |