This is absolutely brilliant. Right now it's very late and I was just checking out some stories when I happened upon this. I didn't feel like reading, but I was just skimming for readable stories to read later. But from the first line I was hooked. You're writing is wonderful, it has such a personality and imagination and every stylistic element you'd like a writer to have in a great story. Your words are so lyrical and flowing that the story could have been a song and still work out beautifully. The story itself is captivating, and even with a few lines you have the ability to paint a portrait of a character's unique personality. You're style is VERY refreshing, and I'm kind of amazed no one has given any reviews thus far, because this is amazing. I've faved the story, but I'll have to fav you as well so I don't miss out on more of your stories. Wonderfully written, good work!