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Litheral 2005-12-09 . chapter 1
Darker times my friend? Very nicely written, good spelling. But I was wondering in line 18(yes I did count them) where it says "It's my life and choose to end it" Did you mean to put...and "I" choose to end it. Just something I spotted. Love you babe.(be happier. write about a dog hair or something)
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