I like the part where I squish the monday. It made me laugh. xD

Liked the repetition, too. I find this one more enjoyable to read than the later ones, actually.

this isn't that bad... in fact... i like it... i find that if you go to a website that let's you leave comments (i.e Live journals, these reviews, etc...) then type your poem... if you paste it onto the edit section, you keep the stanzas...

it was a good poem, and the repition made it stand out