Wow. That was beautiful. A poetic story. The closest thing I've ever read to it is something by Francesca Lia Block, I think.

Oh wow, I absolutely loved this. It was very reallistic and it flowed wonderfully, almost like poetry. The last paragraph was a perfect ending for it.

Whoa, just, wow. I'm sorry if you wanted eloquent reviews. I love the way it's written so poetically that the sentences have rhythms. 'Tis a favourite.