Cool! I love this kind of storylines! I always have this type of plot in my mind but never really write it out before. Just watch out for some grammar and typo errors. And i seem, u use the name, kit again..hahaha ^^ Another tip: remember to create twists in these plots because it's rather common. It can get rather difficult later on but continue writing this one, k?

Gee, this is rather good, isn't it? I started off thinking:

"Oh. One of *those* type of stories. *sigh*"

But, after reading it, I found I enjoyed it. Well done. I like the whole religion aspect.

TheUnadulteratedCat