Reviews for Fell in the Trap - FictionPress.com

Needa S 2005-07-28 ch 1,	Hi Caz ^^ The devil can creep up on us very quickly. But he is no match for Christ. Awesome job, love the ending. God Bless ya and keep writing. Needa S.
Seanait 2005-06-03 ch 1,	i wasnt counting syllabelles or anything, but i thought it was quite good! it was touching... I LOVED IT! nice job pats on back
Lotus Bleu 2005-06-03 ch 1,	It doesn't flow at all, and the rhyming seems very, very forced. Examples: "there were many for me who felt worry," and "For me and my kin a house in heaven He has built." The second one has too many syllables to go with the rest of the poem.