it's really "eye opening" i mean. i already understood such things, but it's still powerful.

I liked it. It was really good and very emotional. Good job!

This is amazing! I'm glad you wrote this for everyone to read that we have to face this problem. I love it! I hope everyone reads it and helps fix this horrible problem in this world. GREAT JOB!

you're right...we should all try..

beautiful poem, hope it enlightens all

muchLUB-kerr

OMG this is so sad! If only it's weren't true. Those girls sound so sweet, do they have a chance? Sry, harsh question. This is a very powerful poem, especially the switched tone. It motivates me to want to do something about it. good job.

Love the change in form and language; very powerful message, and too d*mn true!