|Reviews for Breakdown|
| Misguided Youth 4/10/06 . chapter 1
I know you wrote this before you met me but I want to you know that with all my heart and soul I want to make sure that you never feel alone again. I love you and do not want to be alone either.
| ryan 8/9/05 . chapter 1
Hey long time no see..lol...havnt read any in a while...I really dont understand how you can feel so bad about things, you must have had some really bad experiences or you just injoy writing about things like this...I cant say I realy like this one but I see its not one of your favorites either...again its about pain and you "breaking down"...either way I injoyd reading it and hope to see more...from the all mighty from above saying I'm outie...peace..
| Slowly Sinking 6/3/05 . chapter 1
Deeply moving, emotive poem; great imagery, especially at the end. Very sad.
| Furine Panpasu Kitsuchi 6/3/05 . chapter 1
A great poem. I've felt that way too. Great way to express it. Loved it.