|Reviews for Break the Strings that Keep Me Alive|
| ryan 7/22/05 . chapter 1
-_-...hey...you dont want to die and you know it...but the drown me in ur pee...just no...just never again...not kool not right...i dont know what to say about this one either
| Baileygirl35 6/5/05 . chapter 1
It's a nice poem...has a nice flow...
| Slowly Sinking 6/3/05 . chapter 1
Wow. Good poem, very morbid. Maybe I wouls've put 'Alive' on its own line, but that's just me. N I've just noticed how many poem's you've put up today...