...not like...understand, relate to...but at the same time...like. its strange

goodness. I don't know what to say to this piece. it sounds...horrible (what happened to er...you?)

P.s. thanks for all the reviews!For "laxative", i never used the word 'garnish'...it was 'garish' (an adjective itself and therefore incapable of being 'past-tensified'...or whatever you call it..yepps)

Do keep writing ! D

A lot of raw anger in the poem. Continue writing!

Mayumi