me thinks it's cute :p

The reason people aren't seeming to read or review your story is because its a middle area, if you put your story into fantasy or something, you'd have loads of reviews. Your story is good, so please continue! ^_^

I thought about that idea of making this just the beginning right after I clicked 'Review'. So you're not going toofast at all then. Anyways...

Aw, please continue! It's not about reviews/reviewers! It's about if you want to write and enjoy writing it! ...I hope you actually *do* enjoy writing this...

Well, yeah. Again, I can't wait for the next installment!

Again, you're going to fast, unless this is going to be a short story. *sigh* I prefer long stories, but oh well.

I hope we find out more about who Kira is in the next chapter.

You're writing continues to amaze me. I can't wait for the next installment.

Hm...hot. Good start, but I think if the mysterious vampire guy could've been better as a dream, and then this happening later in the story. But still, at least you can write. And write well. Good job, can't wait for the next chappie!