Theres so much anger and hurt expressed here. You write very well.

"I missed the pitch / And I saw it shatter"

You write wonderfully. Your poems are so honest and deep and I really want to read more. Its a good thing there around another 200 more.

wow.. verry deep

what stuns me is..this part

"When I offered you my heart You knew it came with warnings"

this warnings is so real...

good job...

i can feel this...so emotional and so true, it has something to it that makes it so special. and the way you described everything...i love it!