WOAH. Again, I'm speechless. Wow.

You. Are. Amazing. Seriously.

Your poetry is incredible. There are so many poets/writers (including myself) who try desperately hard to get rhyme right...and fail. But you hit the mark straight on. It's just...wow. So good.

*off to read more*

I like it expescially the last stanze where you say she deserves more than a kiss so it seems like you like her but then show you don't in the last line.

I like the opposite meanings to your words, the sarcasm in it. Very nice.

wow...so embittered. so very imbittdered. i love the sheer poetic feel...this is just cynically amazing. very pretty in an angry, hopeless sort of way. lovely.

~*TenderTempted*~

incredible, i love the spin you put on it all. just wicked, a very bitter undertone to it- but that adds to the power and intensity of the poem. love some of the descriptions espeacilly: " copper coin left unspent" great stuff!