the repition in this poem,helps make it very powerful. Beautiful. and passionate. you're a truly great writer, when through your words, others can feel your emotions.

It is(n't) killing me (anymore)

Love the parentheses and the repetition in this. The ending is trying to be powerful, but with the periods it makes it sound like it's hard to say you're over that person. Like you have to stop and make yourself say it. Perfectly written. Brava.

loved it. the clarity, the usage. just awesome. need i say more?