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| Crewger 2006-09-01 ch 1,  | abuseoh like it |
| SummerWind88 2006-08-31 ch 1, | abuseThis is the way one-shots should be written. Briefly explain what's goin on but still there's that small air of mystery to it. Cool |
| writingonpaperx 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED IT. I love oneshots :) |
| callmebelle 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abusewow... this was different, and i really liked it. was it meant to be anorexia that the girl had? it was probably obvious, and i just didn't get it... anyway, i love the short sentences that follow the long ones. great style. |
| Someday-I-will-Understand 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was interesting... diffrent.. but good, it makes me want to know why she is that way, you should continue it. it would make a great story =) O check out my story LNETHU if you get a chance, I'd like to know what you think since you review lots of storys on here. -somedayIwillunderstand |
| les petits bateaux 2005-12-25 ch 1, | abuseThis was very interesting and unique. I like the whole content about how she isn't actually human. Very good. ~~Trinity |
| hey maria 2005-11-30 ch 1, | abuseFirstly, thank you for all your nice reviews - they made me feel so warm and happy. I've never read anything like this before. It's so matter-or-fact, but still very, very sad. It's just a little snapshot of a moment but still so powerful. Great job. |
| Stormy Daye 2005-11-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is kind of depressing, I'm not saying that in a bad way though. I just mean the mood through the entire thing is consistent and it's matter of fact. It's not trying to be really memorable or anything, but sometimes that is what makes you really remember it.I read a review you did of someone else's story and it was really good, the criticism I mean. I would love it if you could read and review something (or more than one something) of mine. I think it would help a lot! |
| Bookgirl2021 2005-07-13 ch 1, | abuse...*blank stare*... This is really interesting. What I wonder is why she's the way she is. Why does she say her heart's not working right? Why...why...why? |
| NoFx-JuSt-Me 2005-07-10 ch 1, | abuseGreat work, you have a great way with details! Keep up the great work! Thanks for reviewing my story!After all the reviews I have been getting, I guess I'm going to keep going. And cream-colored things are my thing, I guess! LoL. Thanks Again! |
| cling peach 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was... strange. But good. Very, very good. Fascinating in its content. It was so interesting, I really think you should write more of it. It could turn into a really cool novel. Anyway, good work, keep writing! |