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| Aithwayth 2005-06-26 ch 1,  | abusevery nice! short and to the well... round about point. Keep it up! |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-06-17 ch 1, | abusethis is good. I love the use of words. Very good piece. thanks for the review ~Sorrow~ |
| somefreakylooknchick 2005-06-16 ch 1, | abusewhoa dude. This is a kick ** Haiku |
| citrus scented 2005-06-16 ch 1, | abusewonderful, clever creation of images put together- very very effective. |
| Broken Telephone 2005-06-13 ch 1, | abuseFabulous poem, I must say! I like it very much! |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-06-10 ch 1, | abuse"howling into darkness"- wow. that was a classic line right there. good work! |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-06-09 ch 1, | abusei love the last line the most. its so short and to the point (the whole poem i mean, not just that one line now..) and yeah. i dunno what else to say to it really. is good, i like yesyes! |
| Thyrt 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseah..that was deep.but so deep that you couldn't undersatnd it..i liked it |
| Anna178 2005-06-05 ch 1, | abusefor three lines this is surprisingly good. three amazing lines, huh? well you did good. ANNA |
| catseyeview 2005-06-04 ch 1, | abusehaunting! loved it! and thank you so much for your reviews. |
| simpleplan13 2005-06-04 ch 1, | abusevery interesting |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-03 ch 1, | abuseLovely, I think the syllables are off as a haiku but beautiful nonetheless. |
| dustytiger 2005-06-03 ch 1, | abusethis is really good, not my usal read but i like it a lot, thank you for sharing |