i freaking love this book and if you end up not finishing it it'l definately suck so ya FINISH IT! And i love zula and jess and weirdly i love mel too but u make her sound meaner than just a girl against the government and bestfriend's girlfriend. Sure she IS mean but stil she's 'for the greater good' typa person and i dnt tink she shud b this mean b-cuz she's that type y'know?

THIS IS SO ADORABLE. I realize that this was written ages ago, but I'm really excited to read the rest of it. Also, soemone has probably already replied, but I think that it's called a bailiff. Maybe. Idrk. You might even know by this point, being that this story is, what, six years old?

good intro, and the people are called the Baliff (not sure if I spelled that right).

Hey!

WHERE ARE YOU? This story was just about finished, and then you just left...Is everything okay? Are you dead? Are you dying? Are you on the run from the law? WHAT is going ON? I really miss this story. It was absolutely FAN-FLIPPIN'-TASTIC! I really wish you would come back.

Anyway, I hope things pick up soon. And I definitely hope that this review finds you alive and well.

Luv ya,

Tashi :)

sweet!

you know for the case there could have one more alibi, that would be the restaurant. if it was a really nice one then they would keep a list of who came. they could have checked that or had there waiter/waitress come in. most waiter/waitress remember if someone came in when they see there face.

I know that there's another chapter, but I felt that I just had to add my own two cents. If you even consider dropping this story again I will punch you so hard that you'll fly over the Pacific and land in Russia (and past Asia too.)In other words...I like this story.

I like your story a lot, but Jess is TOO nice. Maybe if he acted with passion, or spirit, or something akin to emotion he would seem more...okay, I don't want to say human, but...Anyways, good story, even though my review means nada seeing as how you've already written a lot of it. That's why I haven't already reviewed. Anyway, thanks!

please update

I really enjoyed this story so far-the last chapt. has me in suspense! Hope you plan on continuing!

finish!

. ! makes me happy... your grammar is perfect(which is amazing in the day and age) and your story is WONDERFUL. all done, please update soon.

*sniffles pitifully*

I miss j00!

*ahem*

We all hate tests *nod nod*

But do try to update. I understand you probably cant now, but do it as soon as you can? Just dont leave this unfinished. Please.

If you don't continue posting this, I will have to hunt you down and hurt you very, very, very badly. Got that?

All right, first of all I want to start off saying that I really like your story, or at least what I've read so far.

There are a couple mistakes (such as skipping words) but that's to be expected.

And second, I love you for knowing/liking Pretty Girls Make Graves. I like them all right (although my FP name pertains to the Smiths song.)

So...keep it up!