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| an interested reader 2008-10-11 ch 1, | good intro, and the people are called the Baliff (not sure if I spelled that right). |
| LilLaTLuv 2007-12-09 ch 1, | Hey! WHERE ARE YOU?!?! This story was just about finished, and then you just left...Is everything okay? Are you dead? Are you dying? Are you on the run from the law? WHAT is going ON?!? I really miss this story. It was absolutely FAN-FLIPPIN'-TASTIC! I really wish you would come back. Anyway, I hope things pick up soon. And I definitely hope that this review finds you alive and well. Luv ya, Tashi :) |
| doodlebug19 2007-04-25 ch 1, | sweet! |
| Sonyashinto 2007-03-18 ch 1, | you know for the case there could have one more alibi, that would be the restaurant. if it was a really nice one then they would keep a list of who came. they could have checked that or had there waiter/waitress come in. most waiter/waitress remember if someone came in when they see there face. |
| djinn-in-a-bottle 2006-08-17 ch 26, | I know that there's another chapter, but I felt that I just had to add my own two cents. If you even consider dropping this story again I will punch you so hard that you'll fly over the Pacific and land in Russia (and past Asia too.)In other words...I like this story. |
| Djinn-in-a-bottle 2006-08-17 ch 14, | I like your story a lot, but Jess is TOO nice. Maybe if he acted with passion, or spirit, or something akin to emotion he would seem more...okay, I don't want to say human, but...Anyways, good story, even though my review means nada seeing as how you've already written a lot of it. That's why I haven't already reviewed. Anyway, thanks! |
| rocky19 2006-08-07 ch 27, | please update |
| gabriella 2006-05-04 ch 27, | I really enjoyed this story so far--the last chapt. has me in suspense! Hope you plan on continuing! |
| rabid.squirrels 2006-05-03 ch 26, | finish! |
| rabid.squirrels 2006-05-03 ch 27, | I.LOVE.YOUR.STORY! makes me happy... your grammar is perfect(which is amazing in the day and age) and your story is WONDERFUL. all done, please update soon. |
| EoBear 2006-02-15 ch 27, | *sniffles pitifully* I miss j00! *ahem* We all hate tests *nod nod* But do try to update. I understand you probably cant now, but do it as soon as you can? Just dont leave this unfinished. Please. |
| Renaissance Phoenix 2006-01-21 ch 26, | If you don't continue posting this, I will have to hunt you down and hurt you very, very, very badly. Got that? |
| Pretty Girls Make Graves 2006-01-14 ch 6, | All right, first of all I want to start off saying that I really like your story, or at least what I've read so far. There are a couple mistakes (such as skipping words) but that's to be expected. And second, I love you for knowing/liking Pretty Girls Make Graves. I like them all right (although my FP name pertains to the Smiths song.) So...keep it up! |
| LilLaTLuv 2005-12-09 ch 27, | Hey! I like the chapter name A LOT! It's great. And I'm so glad you're BACK...again! Lol. Anywho, it's a great chappie, but definitely just a filler. Me, when I do fillers, I post another chappie with it, just to make people happy. But that's just me. This was fine. Stupid dad. Stupid pregnancy. Stupid, stupid genie! UPDATE SOON! I want to see her break down from all the stress, and Jesse hold her and all that jazz. That's always so SWEET! So, PLEASE update soon!?! Pretty please? Luv ya,Tashi :) |
| surly_mermaid 2005-11-30 ch 27, | Yay! You updated! I read this story months ago and was about to lose faith of it ever being updated, so now I am very happy! :-)I don't even remember if I've reviewed this one before, and for that I apologize. I really do love this story, and how you've created the wholeb believable and intriguing civilization of Celesta, and of course all your fabulous characters. Oh my, a lot of conflict in this chapter! Can't wait to see how all these tangled webs unwind! Update again soon! :-) |