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| zachy 2005-08-21 ch 1,  | abuseI know how badly the silence hurts in the situation you described. |
| Spriggi 2005-06-16 ch 1, | abuseoh wow, great poem. did you make that up? if so you've really got a gift. keep up the good work. by the way i finally wrote a new story. check it out. JESUS LUVS U AND GOD HAS A PLAN FOR YOUR LIFE! (THAT GOES OUT TO EVERY1) great poem |
| Emotions Running Deep 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseEmotions kept inside so deep that the pains don't ease. Silence leaving only questions and making us think twice about our actions or words. I love the 3rd and 4th line from the bottom. You put true emotion and surrounding into this to enhance the overall effect of the silence. Very well written. |
| brokenbober 2005-06-05 ch 1, | abuseoh my god! this is amazing. i feel this way all the time. |
| simpleplan13 2005-06-04 ch 1, | abusevery sad and powerful.. especially the glass part & that alst line... silence is definately the worse... nice job |
| dustytiger 2005-06-03 ch 1, | abusethis is realyl good, i have felt like this a few times, when you just want somoene to yell their guts out at you cause you messed up big time, and they just give that diapointed look, and you know you'd feel so much better if you were just yelled at, great peice, i really like the way you wrote it, it flows so well, thank you for sharing |
| Princess-anna57 2005-06-03 ch 1, | abuseA great poem! Well done! Write on! ~Anna~ |
| Unready 2005-06-03 ch 1, | abuseawesome, good job. |