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| acatsrain 2008-10-08 ch 34, | abuseThis really does seem like a realistic story. I have to say it takes a lot for me to watch a writer set down chapters with patience and for me the be interested. But with this I think reading this story slowly unfold is not only needed, but liked. It seems like and first Adrienne was naive about being intimate in the aspects of having everything be unknown to her and now shes naive on the fact that she doesn't understand the percuastions that are involved in knowing. Thats just me and I don't know if that even makes any sense. Then again if its on purpose it probably does. The situations taking place were... surprising but in a way I really couldn't say there too soon considering they have a kid together and everything. I think that Johnny's conclusion was justifiable. And I watched The Secret Life of the American Teen. It is amusing. I love how they even start off the story after shes pregnant as if they can't discuss it. There making teen pregnancy PG or something and its just not realistic. Anyway, I'm glad you updated I've been waiting forever for you too and I didn't really know if you would. |
| writer's insantiy 2008-10-05 ch 34, | abuseMore. I love it. Whoop whoop. This is really good. You should publish this some day. |
| anybody 2008-10-04 ch 34, | abusegreat story and excellent character development. please update soon |
| lexamisshxo 2008-10-04 ch 34, | abusehuge fan! I've been folowing this story for about a year now and still love it as much as I did before! That was a twist with johnn and everythihng. I really thought that now they would be with eachother!! ah ): BUT STILL LOVED IT! please update soon!(: |
| Alenor 2008-10-03 ch 34, | abuseoh there's more? can you upload it really really soon please? i really wanna read it! this was a great start to the chappie, cya later ~ Alenor |
| starfly20 2008-10-03 ch 34, | abuseAmazing! Seriously amazing. You really are a great writer. I wish I could be that great. Everytime I start something, after a while I give up...But then again awhile for me is like, two weeks. I lack inspiration. BUT OMG! I loved this chapter. Post soon! Can't wait to see the other part... |
| Dances-With-Pen 2008-10-03 ch 34, | abuseI'm steadily awaiting Dana's downfall. Please, make it so sweet. Put karma at it's bitchiest. On a good note, great chapter. |
| Banana Bun 2008-10-03 ch 34, | abuseYes! You updated! I liked this chapter. I'm curious to see what will happen with Adrienne and Brock's day. Update soon pleease. :) |
| BeautifulDisaster277 2008-10-03 ch 34, | abuseNot disappointing! It was very, very good, as always. |
| xoxokristen 2008-10-03 ch 34, | abuseGood chapter, i like where the story is going, but i want to know more about adrienne and what she is going to do, is she going to school in the fall? |
| 13redsoxchick1991 2008-10-03 ch 34, | abuseI love your story. I found it last weekend and read it all in oneday. Its incredable. The way you describe the charters and thier feeling/thoughts is truely amazing. And your story has made me want to start writing again. Keep up the fantastic work. Cant wait till the update! |
| Written 2008-09-24 ch 11, | abuseaww they can still go to college. my best friend got pregnant in high school and is still going to an ivy league school. granted her husband has a job, which makes it easier. good story so far :) |
| Poetrymaiden 2008-09-17 ch 33, | abuseWow. I spent al day reading this story. I can now honestly say that this is my favorite story on the site. You give amazing depth to all of the characters, which makes me happy because I absolutely hate it when characters have no depth and they fall in love instantly. I love the fact that you're giving their romance build up. Please update soon, and when you do publish this into a book, I will be one of the first ones to pick up a copy. :D |
| xoxokristen 2008-09-13 ch 33, | abuseI really love this story, i was iffy about it at first, but it has really developed into something great. Please update again soon, i want some more action!! |
| starfly20 2008-09-08 ch 33, | abuseThis is my new favourite story... Like in the whole freaking world! And that says alot... 'Cause I read PLENTY of stories. Yeah...you totally got robbed! All these new pregnant-what-happened-at-band-camp-Juno-Jamie-Pact buzz has stolen your thunder! You so had the freaking idea first! Secret Life... is a joke; seriously! It's like come on! So much bad acting! OMG! They did it...actually no. I'm kinda confuzzled with what they did. Like...I know this might sound weird, but I'm just thinking 'well, what kinda s*x did they have?' Like, just classify this for me. They had s*x, or they just fooled around in this chapter? I hope it's awkward and strange for them the morning after. 'Cause that only brings more drama, and it makes me want to read more! Update whenever you feel. ~starfly20 |