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| SweetWithUncertainty 2005-10-20 ch 1,   | Wow, that was utterly awesome, for a poem about pain and suffering. Thx for the review, GREAT POEM ~SG~ |
| Stylo 2005-08-18 ch 1, | Now tht's what I was talking about! You still managed to paint those pictures in my mind, even while satisying the insane craving I own for rhyming verse. The words flow so smoothly...made me think of a slow wave, lapping gently at the shore, washing wandering feet, drawing back, further and further away...and then slamming into those very same people with a force that throws them into sea, makes them loose their grip as the waves move further and further back, slowly...then softly comes back to the shore, gently carrying the bodies it has maimed.Or maybe that's just me. ;;cracks wry grin;;Ah, well, dearie, I've still got the rest of your stuff to read!;;waves at computer screen;; |
| poet tree 2005-06-23 ch 1, | I like the format you put this in, and of course I like the poem. Good job, write more! |
| Lynnie-Pooh 2005-06-23 ch 1, | This is going onto my favorites. I just can't explain how good this was. Such power, emotion and feeling. The 3 things you need to make a poem come together. It was awsome. Please write more. -Lyn- |
| The Ragdoll 2005-06-16 ch 1, | This reminds me of a book I read. I don't remember which book it was, or what it was about, but this basically describes the main character's emotions and problems. And, like the book I don't remember did, this poem brings a lump to my throat. I like the format, too; the back and forth between center and left side, and the font bold/italic/normal changes. I like your style. |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-06-03 ch 1, | Fascinating, its kind of like a roller coster ride on paper. I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |