|Reviews for The End|
| arianna 3/14/06 . chapter 1
| Rachelle You Bitch 8/25/05 . chapter 1
me gusta mucho!
submit this one. aren't you the avid fan of ellipses! ("...")
| Rakira9 7/27/05 . chapter 1
this is sad. you can feel the pain of abandonment in the worlds of your poem. the short lines say alot more than they look like they should. good job.
| Nobody-n-Particular 6/6/05 . chapter 1
Funness. No I like the rhyming. Nice, but it doesn't seem your best.
| perdita's kiss 6/6/05 . chapter 1
wow. that's all I can say. that's really good. I think I might have to start posting my poems and things because I can't keep a story going.
| Nicole 6/4/05 . chapter 1
I really like it, whos it going out too?
| Eyes of Amethyst 6/3/05 . chapter 1
Love the rhyming scheme. A simple poem that touched me. Keep it up! )
Eyes of Amethyst
| RedXfire 6/3/05 . chapter 1
Nice ending but hmm its a very mix still very awsome
| colorguardgeek 6/3/05 . chapter 1
great poem I loved the rhyming bits.
| garage-door-opens 6/3/05 . chapter 1
I can definitely relate.