confusion..

me gusta mucho!

submit this one. aren't you the avid fan of ellipses! ("...")

this is sad. you can feel the pain of abandonment in the worlds of your poem. the short lines say alot more than they look like they should. good job.

Funness. No I like the rhyming. Nice, but it doesn't seem your best.

wow. that's all I can say. that's really good. I think I might have to start posting my poems and things because I can't keep a story going.

Would I

I really like it, whos it going out too?

Love the rhyming scheme. A simple poem that touched me. Keep it up! )

Eyes of Amethyst

Nice ending but hmm its a very mix still very awsome

great poem I loved the rhyming bits.

I can definitely relate.