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| Killer.Sinner.Whore 2007-03-17 ch 1,  | abuseVery nicely written. I love how you compare it to a disease "The only illness I have is that I'm hopelessly in love with you" -- Definately something that will linger in my mind for a long time. Good job! |
| Dominochic 2005-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseOnce again, very good work. You did an excellent job at using similes and metaphors. You put into words what so many people feel. Great job. Only thing I would change would be the line, "Thinking of you every ten seconds out of every minute" You might want to rephrase it, so it's not quite so confusing. Good work |
| Ebony Spiritess 2005-06-21 ch 1, | abuseSad thing is...it's true. Very relateable...however you spell it. Nice job. |
| Alley Rhodes 2005-06-04 ch 1, | abuseOMG I LOVE THIS POEM!I can relate to it so well! |