Very powerful. Definitely a fav. Thanks for reviewing.

I like this one alot. Its awesome how you acheived the underlying anti-war message through emotion, instead of through sarcasm or cynicism. Also, I like how you brought the title back in the end; very effective.

P.S thanks for the fav! (i didnt think it derserves it, but, yeah.. =) )

Awesome. I love it. The imagery is so powerful.

Thats my kind of poem. The rhyming was magnificent not the least bit forced, your 10 for 10. caliorbust