Reviews for My Walk in the Dark

Gaki Toki
2005-06-04
ch 1,

abuseDid you know this "Millie"? If you did then I'm sorry, I've had to walk dark streets and with my paranoia...it's Hell. I end up with my feathers ruffled and my hair standing on end! I can't walk to Vidler's 5 & 10 with out freakin' out! Well...in the dark at least. Be strong, if you show you're not afraid, they won't hurt you...or they will, but remember, even if you don't have a religious cell in your body, if you pray for protection, and believe, and be humble before the Lord, he'll grant you it. Like that one urban legend about that girl who was walking alone in an ally and prayed to God for protection. She made it home safely but another girl was raped not five minutes after she had gotten out of there. When they caught the murderer they asked him why he had not jumped the FIRST girl who came to the ally and he said, he wouldn't be so stupid as to try to rape a girl with two strong men walking beside her. It's an interesting tale, but it's inspiring as well...just think about it, everyone has a little paranoia (or in my case, a ton) it's just the way you look at the world that makes the difference. Well, here you go, my review, glad to make them anytime you're feeling neglected! *bows*

Long days and pleasant nights, Gaki Toki

Princess-anna57
2005-06-04
ch 1,

abuseWow, i've thought that a million times too. Great poem. It's well written.

Write on!

~Anna~

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