Nice! Ominous and sinister, and finishes off well.

probably because i have some music playing but i think this would make for a really good part in a song, like in the parts where the singer speaks inbetween singing the last 2 choruses, so yeah, i like this, i love the words "sickly gold" and the very ending, very cool. oh, and thanks for the faves, much appreciated :) x weasel within x