Horrific. I liked it.

i'm sorry! geez, i think not letting me reveiw your stuff is a bit extreme, but hey do what you want. written apology is posted in my bio, so please read it. i really like this one. not saying that just because i feel bad now. i'll keep my mom shut from now on. i guess not everyone feels the same as i do about reveiws. man, ok, i'm sorry. forgive me.

HELLO!i love that bit about the nazi lampshade. and the "fan slicking and pirouetting menacingly at my face" bit.You wrote that for poetry workshop didn't you! Love it!

Found the way you arranged your lines into stanzas strange, but interesting all the same. Particularly fond of the first line.