SIK! I LUV THIS ITS ...GREAT, UNIQUE, SERIOUS AND FUNNY ! THIS IS GOING ON FAVES!~TRW

hehehe...i like it...it shows what different people value in life based on their function in society...i like the lyrical flow..it would make a good folk song...and hehehe..gotta love that spam!...cyanide

haha unexpected at the end. Great job!!

fluid.very fluid.-ADD

Very...interesting. You're right, it doesn't really make much sense, but it flows pretty well and it's got a good rythm, so it's not that bad.

Wow! That was wonderful. Keep writing.

It's quite interesting and I like thee idea. Thee first part is a wee bit awkward, and some parts in between, but that can be easily fixed. Keep up thee good work!~Merf.~