I agree with 'thesewords'.
Your writing is beautiful!
I think I've re-read this like, seven times.

you know what? i love all your shit.

everything you write is great.

I didn't get it at first, but now I love it. It's charming - I know it's a st range word to use.

This was so beautiful..I really don't know how else to describe it.

Interesting tone, very unique, but effective, nonetheless. :) Good job.

Aww this is something all girls dream of. This is one thing that I am still dreaming of.
Loved it =D
~*~Ngoc1231~*~

That was really cute. :) I think my favorite past definitely has to be the beginning of the story when she's talking about the time space continuium (wow...big science words. I have no idea where that came from. Haha)

By the way, I don't know if I ever told you this, but you're my favorite oneshot author. I just know I can count on you when I want something sweet, short, and simple. :)

-Katherine

What a story! Good use of time here, adds to the strangely apathetic tone, which was a pretty interesting tone to write in because the main character is clearly not apathetic in any sense of the word. Lovely stream of consciousness.

that was amazing.
i love it.
good job.
=]

"9: 43 and 44 seconds. Only one hour, twenty-six minutes, and 26 seconds left of this torture. Only."

I'll let you figure out what's wrong with it.

I like the emotion and the structure. 'Tis realistic as well.
I think you need to change "people" to "person" in the second to last paragraph. That is the only thing I could see that wasn't quite right.

Again, well done!
Mairwen

BEAUTIFUL STORY AND I LOVE YOUR PENNAME BTW LOL

genuinely sweet. full stop.
wished i could add it to my favourites but for some reason i cant log in.

great writing

ECK! First off, I loved it!

I really like how you used the time countdown and how the first-person is slightly different. The begining really drew me in too. AWESOME JOB!

adorable! i love the anonymity of it and how they have no names, its really well written ^^.