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IzandriaJohnson 2008-05-11 . chapter 20
I'd have to say, A B or D

mostly in this order
D
A
B
kingrankar76 2008-02-25 . chapter 20
I think I like option D the best unless the major death involves Selene? coz I would love to see her die
crazychic7278 2008-02-25 . chapter 20
What an awesome story, i actually stopped to read this, usually i dont read a whole story cause it bores me but it didnt and i really loved it...
rocknrosebubbles 2008-02-25 . chapter 20
here is an idea, why dont you use all of the above options? they all tie in well together and would make a great story however, if i had to pick one i would go with... C lol

love the story i really do :)
tanya2byour21 2008-02-25 . chapter 20
I like B can I kind of throw and idea out there. What is you guys use be and Dorian and her are broke up but when Selene esapes they come back together because they are both in danger. then she can die. LOL I again I like B or A.
Tanya
xToXTheXEndx 2008-02-25 . chapter 20
Hm...I'm gonna go with...C. It seems like it would be the most interesting. ^_^
Seraph-of-Nightsong 2008-02-25 . chapter 20
B or C! :)
tanya2byour21 2008-01-09 . chapter 19
I loved how you ended this and I so can't wait to read the next story in this if you write it. I am going to check now and see if you have started it. Keep up the great writing.
Tanya
FM Radio 2007-10-18 . chapter 12
her mom is a different kind of woman! :)
Joanie 2007-09-25 . chapter 19
Let me say I am really glad that you updated. I have loved this story and totally want to read more. That being said, I am a little disappointed to know that you were planning on ditching this story (and your readers) with only one chappie to go. Hope for more of Dorian and Ariella in a sequel, we need to see some happy time for these poor characters : )
Initially loaded 2007-09-25 . chapter 19
YOU FINALLY WROTE SOME MORE!
OoohLookACat 2007-09-25 . chapter 19
oh that was perfect
tear
but i got a little confused about their ages this chapter
i think i might have forgotten about it after a while
but it was perfect :)
i loved every minute of it
and i would love to hear more
if you're willing that is :)
*hint hint*
lol

izzie
Unique Child 2007-09-24 . chapter 19
Wow. This is great. Are you guys going to write an epilogue??
krissy 2007-07-28 . chapter 18
Please continue this story. I would be really sorry to see it just left hanging and unfinished. Look forward to more. I hope that it all does work out for Dorien and Ariella but he still needs to apologise for the comment about leaving her. Wishing you and your muse good luck.
Honestly Yours. 2007-06-18 . chapter 18
Damn you! I know this thang aint over. You better update. You left on a cliffy. That aint no fair! PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU ON MY KNEES! BEGGING! UPDATE!
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