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Reviews For: Failing Hearts

OcarinaWarrior
2005-06-17
ch 1,
I've had days where it feels EXACTLY like this is all happening! The world is flipped upside-down and everything is breaking or not working right.

Yes, society is on a downward slope, but hopefully we will be saved eventually!
The Moribund Marionette
2005-06-04
ch 1,
This is very powerful (dispite the minor grammatical error in line 13). I can really feel the emotion and the...well, the power in your words. Very, very good. You are talented. ~Writer of Darkness~
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