this is cool. i really like that it's true whether you read it from a positive point of view or a negative point of view.

i also liked that you used simple yet effective word choice. i like that you didn't overflow the meaning with a bunch of huge descriptive words that half the world has never heard. just simple words that paint a very distinct picture.

good job.

the grating within us. i like this a lot, it really gets under your skin with the offering of a new perspective. well done!

That's exactly how I think. I sucks, though, doesn't it? Even when the world is trying to sleep, you know that something bad is always happening.

Anyway, great poem. It didn't drag like so much poetry does on this website, and it said things like they are. I loved it.